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    dots Submission Name: where will it enddots
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    Author: nameless_nobody
    ASL Info:    18 in a few days.
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 333/421/67
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1436
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 557



    Description:
       hey i woke up with a hangover ok. why the fuck to people always want everything explained. just read it


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    dotswhere will it enddots
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    lifes a bitch so you start drinking
    drinkings a bitch so you turn to weed
    weeds a bitch so you try heroin
    heroins a bitch and your life is ruined so you kill yourself
    deaths a bitch then you wake up in the coffin
    starving to death 6 foot unders a bitch so you kill yourself again
    deaths a bitch then you find out all that heaven and hell shit was true
    st petres a bitch so you go to hell
    hells a bitch then you wake up with a hangover and think about buying some weed.

    where will it end




    Submitted on 2004-08-09 14:33:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very very amusing. I have to say I smiled. I dont laugh out loud so don't think a smile isn't good. The use of [censored] is a little repetitous but it works for this piece. You're a writer with alot of character. I like your stuff.
    reid kat
    | Posted on 2004-08-09 00:00:00 | by reid kat | [ Reply to This ]


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