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where will it end

Author: nameless_nobody
ASL Info:    18 in a few days.
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hey i woke up with a hangover ok. why the fuck to people always want everything explained. just read it

where will it end

lifes a bitch so you start drinking
drinkings a bitch so you turn to weed
weeds a bitch so you try heroin
heroins a bitch and your life is ruined so you kill yourself
deaths a bitch then you wake up in the coffin
starving to death 6 foot unders a bitch so you kill yourself again
deaths a bitch then you find out all that heaven and hell shit was true
st petres a bitch so you go to hell
hells a bitch then you wake up with a hangover and think about buying some weed.

where will it end

Submitted on 2004-08-09 14:33:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very very amusing. I have to say I smiled. I dont laugh out loud so don't think a smile isn't good. The use of [censored] is a little repetitous but it works for this piece. You're a writer with alot of character. I like your stuff.
reid kat
| Posted on 2004-08-09 00:00:00 | by reid kat | [ Reply to This ]

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