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    dots Submission Name: watching the sunsetdots
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    Author: wilderness
    ASL Info:    23/M/Surrey, UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 252/359/86
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 434
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    Description:
       the quote is taken from the song 'black comedy' by bright eyes.


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    dotswatching the sunsetdots
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    he wrote these words
    with bright eyes
    round and wide
    staring out from
    his early grave

    quote

    "like coffins dropped into the earth
    the saddest sound we ever heard"

    unquote

    jesus
    this is bad
    we should go outside
    we really need some sunshine




    Submitted on 2004-08-09 18:18:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      what was that sound so profound?

    can you tell me, unlike jules wouldn't tell me what was in his boss's case?

    it's gonna kill me.
    | Posted on 2004-09-08 00:00:00 | by murf | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the end...i think my heart says that to me several times a day but sunlight...icky...brightness and heat...i argue with my heart about it.
    | Posted on 2004-08-10 00:00:00 | by joe quinn | [ Reply to This ]
      whatever it is that's inspiring you these past few days has taken your writing to another level.
    i really like the way you use the quote.. especially the 'quote unquote'.. very original.
    there is this distinct running theme in all your recent poems.. why not make a series of it and submit it to a publisher?
    | Posted on 2004-08-10 00:00:00 | by girlinthephoto | [ Reply to This ]



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