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    dots Submission Name: Runaway Traindots
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    Author: dax
    ASL Info:    35 male BC Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 127/127/42
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 407
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    Description:
       my mind most of the time like a runaway train


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    dotsRunaway Traindots
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    A runaway train inside my head,
    and with my train of thought I lie awake in bed.
    So my head pounds with this thunder,
    trying not to err, derail, and make a blunder.
    With each new idea I frantically fret,
    with my minds' propulsion like a jet.
    Each passenger car with a new proposal,
    to use my mind's track at its' disposal.
    This runaway train without destination,
    a pretend engineer rides without hesitation.
    No brakes in the engine can I find,
    so I may lose thoughts in my mind.
    Never to see them and buried in time,
    so I do not tarry in writing with rhyme.
    For fear I may forget at great cost,
    something on this transit that might get lost.

    January 11,2004




    Submitted on 2004-08-10 13:56:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you've described insomnia very well. I know how this feels like, have felt it way too often. usually I don't like rhyming so much but you've done it quite well. good piece.
    | Posted on 2004-08-10 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      Good stuff Good stuff. It's my biography...I am the same way. I especially liked this poem, not only for your writing abilities, but also for the fact that it made me think about my younger days, a song from way back when. Well, not that way back, but far enough. 'Runaway Train' by Soul Asylum. So thanks for the trip down Memory Lane.
    | Posted on 2004-08-10 00:00:00 | by WaxingPoetic | [ Reply to This ]



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