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    dots Submission Name: Shades of lifedots
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    Author: Broken
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 139/137/36
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsShades of lifedots
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    Autumn Leaves
    Shades of my life
    Fly in the wind
    All crispy and dry

    Deep auburn red
    My prime time youth

    Green like the grass
    My wisdom as sane

    Yellow and bleak
    Me losing hope

    Brown and withered
    Memories to forget

    These are the shades of a confused girl's life
    Who cluthches mightily at the green and the red
    Letting yellow and brown blow far away
    And hoping spring will bring a wondrous shade.




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