Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

respirar


Author: Deep Ace Thinks
ASL Info:    35/M/ Spring, TX
Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 124 /190 /60
Words: 118
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 1115
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 853



Description:


"breathe" translated into spanish


respirar



Escribiendo cosas que me gustaría decir
mis palabras,
mis pensamientos,
mi deseo de permanecer,
desligado de todo lo que está a mi alcance hoy.

y respiro...
pensando en las formas que me gustaría que sintieras
mi corazón,
mis manos,
y las cosas que hacen que los días reales
se desvanezcan en semanas,
y las semanas en años;
pensamientos en recuerdos,
a medida que vamos enfrentando nuestros miedos.

y respiramos...
aire que ha fluído a través de los pulmones de nuestros fantasmas
y vida que ha olvidado mucho más que mucho;
maneras de perdonar,
tiempo para olvidar;
suerte de pocos,
cosas que lamentar.

y respiramos...









Submitted on 2004-08-11 13:58:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments


  Spanish always sounds so darn SEXY! You could be writing take the garbage out or hey dumb ass you're on the wrong side of the road and I would be all swoozy!
Hope all is well w/you fellow wordsmith! My trip to Houston didn't evolve so I'm still in CA. Hope all is well with you & it seems you are quite astute at Spanish Senor! Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith!
| Posted on 2004-08-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



20693