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    dots Submission Name: sick little bastarddots
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    Author: aftertheflesh
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 76/113/48
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotssick little bastarddots
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    bitch-slaped
    by a fish
    kneed in the groin by a heartless
    whore
    stabbed in theback by my best friend
    and gutted by raw emotion
    she was the one i knew it
    but she was a slut and blew any one with a cock
    my god i have to stop falling in live with girls i pay to have sex with me




    Submitted on 2004-08-11 15:14:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      jesus, man...! yeah, fallin for those whores ain't such a good thing...the fact that they are gettin your money makes it easy for them to pretend, make it seem like you got a shot or somethin...i get more lapdances than my guy friends at strip clubs, so i know how you must feel, like they were struggling to see over the bar so they could catch a glimpse, get their own lil hard ons goin...but i'm sorry. girls like that, that you pay for, their only worth that...they do it for a living. i guess its kinda trashy, hard to see them as much like people after a while...but really, find a good...well, we're all a little bad...find a DECENT girl, is that a little better? girls can be tricky, bro...good luck, and anyway, i think this poem rocks. its not really sick, just sad and unfortunate, thats all. latah~april
    | Posted on 2004-08-11 00:00:00 | by leper messiah | [ Reply to This ]
      this was good but where did you get the [censored] slapped with a fish part are you a monty python fan by any chance? and why did his best friend stab him in the back?
    | Posted on 2004-08-11 00:00:00 | by lilmiznaughty04 | [ Reply to This ]



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