i like this piece about the Great Spirit. i love the image of us as "feathers of Himself." and how you say no, we aren't flying in the dark, we are simply enveloped by his shining light. simply beautiful.
The Great Spirit, has many names and many followers. I expected to view an American Indian style of writing, but then the Great Spirit, is onipresent is he not! I do whole heartedly agree with the message and entire writing. God will bless you, for spreading His messages. I guarantee it.
OK, so I read the comments too, and I agree, there's nothing to fix here. It's a good theme with a nice crescendo to the end. On my page there's "invention" which I think you'd like. See what you think. Good write! nansofast