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what is wrong with me?

Author: brokenmirror
ASL Info:    150/f/duiuwy89
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Words: 114
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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a kind of depressing poem....o well

what is wrong with me?

i just wanna scream
i just wanna tell u all how i feel
because im dying inside
and i dont feel real
whats wrong with me?
how did this mess start
and how can i stop it
before i fall apart

my smiles now turn to tears
my wishes now are all fears
my hopes are gone
i have none left
whats wrong with me?
what is wrong?

being misrable can be an art
it can be so beautiful sometimes
to see the world through sad eyes
to say your words with sighs
to not walk, yet drag your feet
to just lay there in defeat
to just lay there in defeat

Submitted on 2004-08-11 22:25:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  your poem is beautiful and realistic too, but there is just something about it...i dunno what really. It seems as though it's too realistic. That everyone can relate to it too know what i mean? Poetry has to be something that no one has ever felt has to open peoples' eyes and let them see something through the eyes of your poetry. through your words. this just seems plain. i've felt everything you have said but it doesnt make me feel any different.
| Posted on 2004-08-12 00:00:00 | by Napastak | [ Reply to This ]

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