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    dots Submission Name: Long Lost Brotherdots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    Bytes: 383



    Description:
       This was written for my half brother that i've never met.


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    dotsLong Lost Brotherdots
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    Tho we've never met, we've never even spoke. You still a part of me that I wish I could see, and wish I could meet. Your my brother, not just any brother my on and only older brother.

    Your the one person I want to meet, spend a day with. I want to learn about you, what you like to do. I need to tell you I love You!

    Do you even know I exist?




    Submitted on 2004-08-12 15:10:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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