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    dots Submission Name: Something Newdots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 797
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    Bytes: 525



    Description:
       This is for my boyfriend who i love with all my heart! I just wanted to let him know how i felt... I know its short but what the hey!


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    dotsSomething Newdots
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    There's something new upon me. Its this feeling everything will be alright. I'll have you here to protect me, and keep me safe at night. To have and hold forever or until the time is right.

    When I say I love you its with all my heart. What is there not to love: your funny, sweet, can hold me tight, you listen, your loving, you make everything right. I could die happy being with you at the end of the night.

    I want to tell you I Love You and hope to be with you the rest of my life.




    Submitted on 2004-08-12 15:12:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      original but with meaning. always great words for everyones and anyones perfect someone. im sure this meant alot to your boyfriend and its good to know people can find others to hold on to and be strong with. nice job.
    | Posted on 2004-08-12 00:00:00 | by birdy5005 | [ Reply to This ]
      original but with meaning. always great words for everyones and anyones perfect someone. im sure this meant alot to your boyfriend and its good to know people can find others to hold on to and be strong with. nice job.
    | Posted on 2004-08-12 00:00:00 | by birdy5005 | [ Reply to This ]


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