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    dots Submission Name: .....FADE.....dots
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    Author: Amberdy
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 240/232/59
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 359
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1077



    Description:
       I wrote this poem a long time ago, and I honestly don't even know what isnpired it. I just wrote and this was the result. What do you think?


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    dots.....FADE.....dots
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    Pictures fade to black and white
    secrets remain untold
    lies unvieled
    reveal the truth
    as the mytery unfolds
    a flame goes out
    another lesson learned
    a promise broken
    as the tables turn
    retrace the steps
    that brought me here
    the vision suddenly
    becomes so clear
    the pain grows deeper
    hold back the tears
    as memories fade in
    from all the past years
    holding on to whatever's left
    trying to be strong
    it's hard to bear a smile
    when everything's gone wrong
    put together the missing pieces
    I lost so long ago
    remembering the pain it caused
    so deep inside my soul
    I can't see the end of this
    but I'm trying to believe
    that one day it will be easier
    for my dreams to be achieved
    and I don't have all the answers
    but sometimes I pretend
    that all these things will fade away
    and soon I'll start again






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