Description: This song is about my dad and how he was never there for me and my sister
The Way I Am -------------------------------------------
How should i act around you?
I don't want to be fake like you?
Why can't you accept the way I am?
Hopefully someday you'll understand
That this is the way I am
When I need you the most
You're never ever there
But when I don't need you at all
You're always at my beck and call
Why can't you accept the way I am?
Hopefully someday you'll understand
That this is the way I am
You had a daughter that you said you loved
But you tore her heart in two
And i've tried to fix it so many times
But it's like a puzzle
That only you can put back together
Why can't you accept her the way she is?
Hopefully someday you'll understand
That this is the way she is
You had you're chance but now it's over
I have found someone to replace you
He know how to put the puzzle together
again...............
When you accept us the way we are
You'll finally understand
This is the way we are.
Emotion is really the key to your poem, because it seems like you're pulling further away from your mother, because she won't except you the way you are and it seems that whenever you don't need her, that she's there to try and help when you need her the least. Yet, you have tried to make her understand and she just won't accept that that's the way you are, so you found someone to fill your void and together you have helped one another. And now mother can't accept that, because she could never accept the way you were. I can completely relate, cause my mom treats me like a robbed a cradle and whenever I need her the most she is never there, well she is, but she just doesn't have the time to listen. Maybe one day she'll understand me...no, maybe one day your mother will understand you...no, but don't every let anyone underestimate what you can become without them
Okay, well um...good right. Lol, sorry about the um. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem, in one way or another. I know I can. Good write and yeah. Lol, sorry couldn't think of anything to say. So yeah! Bye! ~Kriss
This reminds me of how my relationship was a up until a few years ago. All my ideas, what I wanted to be, my artistic side...ect...didn't make since to her. I feel she stifled my creativity and what I wanted to do in life. I moved away and avoid her for several months. When I was ready for her back in my life I told her how I felt and she lets me be now that I 27.
Um...this poem is okay so far I'll look forward to reading this finished project. As you prolly know there are spelling mistakes so dont forget to change those; good job so far but it seems as if this could be more passionate try and see if there is anymore that needs to come out.
Um...this poem is okay so far I'll look forward to reading this finished project. As you prolly know there are spelling mistakes so dont forget to change those; but good job so far.
Submission Name: The Way I Am
