ok, im going to have a shot at this, because this poem has intrigued me! the first stanze (or is that verse?) is from the perspective of a child watching her parents smoke (take drugs) and is enchanted by it. The second is from her perspective years later when her life is shattered and controlled by the seductive beast that allured her years earlier...the final part is her revelation, kind of like the first step in AA, recognition of her problem and the power she has to "un-spin" the drug addiction. I hope im on track with all that. I found this piece refreshing to read because it made me think about what it is you are trying to communicate, but without being so twisted in abstract language that it becomes impossible to interrpret. Good good stuff!