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    dots Submission Name: The Misfitdots
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    Author: jaycee
    ASL Info:    38/F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    4.85 - 2410/1167/153
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Misfitdots
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    A girl struggling to fit in;
    Not quite sure why she does't.
    Every tear of selfdoubt you cry
    Burns a scar into my mother's heart.
    Every time you say you have no friends,
    It bleeds for you.

    With your friendship you offer your heart.
    But life'slittle prejudices and cruelties
    Taught you to be cautious with your feelings.
    Throw aside your cautions.
    Embrace that world.

    For the same tender heart that plagues you now,
    Will triumph in the end.
    As other's friendship come and depart,
    Yours will be as Venus in the midnight sky:
    Forever true; Forever bright.




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      I've felt like a "misfit" time and time again that's for sure. But I've learned to just be myself and not worry about what others think about me these past few years. I think we have all gone through this phase when we don't feel we are good enough. I just hope everyone has had an ephiany like I had and can overcome the "misfit" they believe they are. Great write.
    --blt
    | Posted on 2004-06-16 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
      A heartfelt, touching message to your daughter beautifully rendered..the compassion and empathy underscored repeatedly by the carfeful imagery.I really like the celestial metaphor in the last stanza, ..very nice Silver
    | Posted on 2004-02-18 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey I really like, there are so many people out there who go through a period of not fitting in, and this describes it all!
    | Posted on 2004-02-18 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]
      a somebody wrote me a note with me as the "misfit" and it went something along the lines of the poem but without any rhyming in it. Maybe the "misfit" is just somenone more mature than the other people that surround them?
    | Posted on 2004-02-18 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]



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