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    dots Submission Name: She Bleedsdots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 862/753/192
    Words: 346
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 530
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2174



    Description:
       Written for this story I'm starting to write... about a crazy cast of nine evil... well, stereotypes, really. There's the Fallen Angel (the She of this poem), the Prince of Darkness (the speaker), the vampire seductress, the girly mage, et cetera.


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    dotsShe Bleedsdots
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    Her open cuts begin to bleed
    She falls upon her pale knees
    The feathers drip, the feathers fall
    Is she an angel after all?

    And you have seen her soaring
    On a pair of broken wings
    You've never seen her bleeding
    Though you know she's cut so deep

    Her crystal tears begin to flow
    Her love and sorrow grows and grows
    The blood that drips, the blood that falls
    Is she an angel after all?

    Oh curses to the devil
    That could cause her so much pain!
    Oh woe upon the devil
    Who would hurt her in this way!

    Now in her heart she knows what's true
    What once was gold shines icy blue
    The words that drip, the words that fall
    Is she from heaven after all?

    And all that I can give her
    Is a shoulder where it's safe
    And even though I love her
    She will never feel the same

    Rising from the ground she sighs
    And wipes the teardrops from her eyes
    "So now I trip, and now I fall
    But now I'll stand and face your call."

    Standing by the window
    He turns around and sighs
    And I know he is as heartless
    As the day he left her side

    "Lucifer, you've changed too much
    There's something different in your touch
    The tears must drip, the tears must fall
    Do you believe me after all?

    I thought that you still loved me
    But it seems that I was wrong
    It's time that I stopped crying
    It's time that I moved on

    And now I think I've changed my mind
    So after all that I can find
    My tears will fill an empty pail
    But in the end, I will prevail."

    Through all of this he calmly takes
    A cold, impassive, heartless face
    And all the courage she has shown
    Has only left her out alone

    Now all that I can give her
    Is a shoulder where it's safe
    And even though I love her
    She will never trust again.




    Submitted on 2003-11-14 14:35:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
       very well written! Great job, very poetic and original.
    | Posted on 2003-11-15 00:00:00 | by Webmaster | [ Reply to This ]



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