Vers Libre in french means towards freedom. However I did not realise that you could free bullets from a machine gun! Completely overturned my expectations and I am amazed by how often you seem to be able to do that.
I agree with the "none of them are blanks" line, as, we all don't want our work to end up what we usually consider under our own standards.
Continue this trend. I will continue reading.
I love the new photo! And I love the title of this piece. The only thing that bugged me, and it's rare that I can say anything bugs me about your work, was the line "That my mind releases more like a gun." My problem was that I ran the phrase together, using "more like" as an adverb-adjective pair. It releases more like a gun? More like a gun than what? I stumbled a moment before realizing that you meant you hope your mind releases more, like a gun. A simple comma here identifies this as a simile and not an adjective: "That my mind releases more, like a gun." The piece itself, as usual is light and colorful, and short enough to take in with one breath, and hold that breath in for a minute to roll it around in the mind for a while.
i hope you don't get a headache from those bullets coming out of your head! lol! just kidding. this is interesting, your words like bullets flying out of your head, hoping that they will mean something and not just be "blanks." very clever!
This reminds me of the bible verse saying thy words are sharper then a two edged sword! yeah any word on a paper has the POWER to cut deep into the soul of any one.nice write. Heh you sure don't say much, but what you do say is power packed.