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    dots Submission Name: Finalitydots
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    Author: RequiemOfDreams
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 97/140/38
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Description:
       Why do we see death as closure to life? Why should we? If life lead to death which lead to rebirth and back to life- would that make life better or worse?


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    So much for death and its finality,
    its relinquishment, its closing,
    So much for poor men, those lost men seeking freedom,
    So much for warriors seeking valhalla,
    Since death is so fickle, death is so short termed
    and yet death calls and calls and calls,
    like an ever minding mother always at your back,
    it calls

    Death's strength seemed so strong,
    Yet now death's frailty is as clear as blue
    and the course of tragics follow a hemi-circle of life,
    a quarter circle of death, a quarter circle of rebirth...

    One might even say that life is the cause of it-
    For without death there cannot be rebirth,
    to think that each life is of new binding is
    rediculous in the least, for we theorize
    we're just a system of organs- made of matter...
    Matter being that a constant in the universe

    So Forget death and its finality-
    Its really not so final




    Submitted on 2004-08-15 05:20:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is correct
    Death is not the ending its just the begining

    Great write it made me think

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    Ron

    Thank you for your recent comments I really do appreciate them
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this piece was very interesting. It's something to think about, what you believe about death and life and whether you think there is such a thing as rebirth. Nice work! You really got my mind going!
    | Posted on 2004-08-15 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]


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