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    dots Submission Name: Faithdots
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    Author: mandyshay07
    ASL Info:    17/f/kentucky yall!
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 119/121/32
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 289
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       i dont know what im looking for in this poem.. i wrote it during journal time in my creative writing class because i was bored.. i guess just tell me what you think and if it makes much sense. what do you think its about?


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    dotsFaithdots
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    The soul emits a soft glowing light
    that through the darkness forever will shine.

    A bright ray of sun,
    a golden moon beam,
    a sweet gift of love,
    that the world might believe.




    Submitted on 2004-08-15 13:03:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I thought this was really good. I like the ambiguity in the last line. Do people want to believe in souls or the light of god? That's what I got from it.
    | Posted on 2004-08-15 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      The simplicity of the message underscores the existence of being. Whether the world will believe is another story.

    I liked the brevity and steadiness of the words.
    | Posted on 2004-08-16 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]



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