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    dots Submission Name: Goodbyedots
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    Author: Dandan
    ASL Info:    19/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    4.93 - 604/323/49
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Poem I wrote about 3 years ago at the end of eighth grade. I really suck at writing in yearbooks, so I decided to make a poem in put in all of my friends books (as they knew me as "the poet" anyways). It went as follows...


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    dotsGoodbyedots
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    When the time has finally come
    For me to say goodbye
    I struggle with what words to say
    No matter how I try.
    What simple phrase of significance
    Can portray the thoughts I bear?
    I think, my friend, I'll try this one:
    Thanks for being there.
    I pray to the Lord each day, you know,
    For being blessed with you
    Because that is one thing so rare...
    A friend that's really true.
    Your smile and disposition
    Have consoled me many days;
    You'll never know how important you are:
    My friend in many ways.
    I hope you know I will be here
    In the good times and the bad
    And forever I'll remember you
    The friend I'm glad I had..




    Submitted on 2004-08-15 16:13:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that was touching i think its one of the most beautiful and GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    wow wowow seems to be the only word i can say right now wowwowwowwow !!!!!!! !!!!!! !!




    ~alene~

    p.s if u get a change come and see mine
    | Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by GrIm:)ReApEr | [ Reply to This ]
      A beautiful poem. A really good friendship is so rare one hates to goodbye when they are lucky enough to find one. You have brought that out very well in this poem. An enjoyable read. It made me think of my few good friends, and how very blessed I feel to have them.
    I really like this part -> "What simple phrase of significance Can portray the thoughts I bear? I think, my friend, I'll try this one: Thanks for being there. "

    Take Care!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey. theres one thing i gotta say... man ur good with words! lol. really liked that, words flow brilliantly. and iv felt like that so many times, so it made it even more real while reading it. never know the right thing to say at a goodbye. guess u just gave me a good way out! thanx. well done. cya. Anna
    | Posted on 2004-10-14 00:00:00 | by freak writer anna | [ Reply to This ]
      nice. You have some typos, which indicate quick typing... :-p but otherwise, it's nice. Good idea, to do a poem instead of the same old "have fun, it goes so fast, stay sweet, blah blah blah".
    | Posted on 2004-08-15 00:00:00 | by mixedemotions00 | [ Reply to This ]
      I wish I could've thought of somethign this great to sign yearbooks with. OH well. This poem is really good, a couple lines seemed forced but the topic you chose has li ited resources. My only comment is you've got a typo in the fourth to last line. great write:O)
    --Kayla
    | Posted on 2004-08-15 00:00:00 | by Superman | [ Reply to This ]
      this was great. i never knew what to say in the year books. expecialy to the people who did not know you but wanted to get as many people to sign the bookany ways. well great job lia
    | Posted on 2004-08-23 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      Hehe, an interesting way to write in a yearbook. Its better than the stuff I put in it. I usually put in random and funny (to me anyway...that differs from person to person) sayings that I like. I want friend like that by the way, on that likes me that much. i don't knowe if they make em like that anymore. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
    (ya bum!...hehe)
    | Posted on 2004-08-23 00:00:00 | by ACircuitShock | [ Reply to This ]
      This is nice, I think you did well with your word usage, and you did well with your expression of emotions. If I was one of your friends in school, I would love for you to write that in my year book
    | Posted on 2004-08-28 00:00:00 | by Nashataku | [ Reply to This ]



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