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    dots Submission Name: Terror On The Horizondots

    Author: GhiHaD
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 46/64/24
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       my girl does drama at school and she did a play about the devastation the jewish race suffered... i thought i would write a poem about it

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    dotsTerror On The Horizondots

    Instinctive Predators hunting their foes
    Seeking out the dreggs of life that still remain

    Can you escape?

    The trenches are filled with unlucky souls
    Evil of unknown proportions
    Massive forces of terror lurking beyond the horizon

    They come
    Hear the drum

    Drum of feet marching towards their goal

    Cleansing the world
    Cleansing the world of the filth

    Jewish disgust

    How can you do this?
    What evil is in your heart?
    Do you have no heart?

    Relentless torture of a devastated race
    Tears and screams
    Children replaced
    Superior race

    You are a DISGRACE!

    Help can be obtained
    They are on their way
    Fight the enemies
    Hope is ragained

    These people are just that... PEOPLE

    How can you do this?

    Blood flows through our veins as it does yours
    We are unlike you
    We are human
    You are VERMIN!

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