Fragile words
scrawled on paper scraps
tucked between the pages of a book
Forgotten
Pressed
Delicate blossoms of love
Until I open the book
for other reasons
and rediscover
the tender flowers
the sentiments
Forget-Me-Not
Ohhh, that's beautiful. And I don't even think that you should change it from there because you've just summed it up so beautifully there.
I like the title. I always loved the word "scraps" even though I thought this might be about a puppy :) Good work red, I like the idea of journals being pressed flowers of thought...
So i just read the one before this and said I'd love to see it expanded. Then BOOM here this is. Man, what service!
It makes a lot of sense and was pretty clever how you put all this down. My favorite part was that you chose to use a Forget Me Not flower. Cuz yeah, it's a flower, but within the context of the piece its like saying the page should not be forgotten. That's clever enough to make my head implode. Good Job. ~Aaron
Submission Name: Scraps
