At first glace it did not make any sense. I had to read it twice. But that is what I like about this poem. It not meant to be read fast, and it echoís in your head when you read it back. (Or thatís just me.) I could say that it needs more wording but that would ruin it. It finishes right. I think that it is a wonderful piece and should be published. And that is all I got to say about it. Cause that poem has differently blown my mind away.
i hate it when people say you need to write more! if you had wanted to, the poem would've been longer! duh! i like it 'cause it's just like you were zipping along and saw this orchard, so you wrote it down. it's like a little taste of the fruit on the vine. i like it! (your title should be Orchard, not Orchad).