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    dots Submission Name: What's That Buzz?dots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhat's That Buzz?dots
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    Your kiss is like the flutter
    of a moth's wing against my cheek;
    your caress is clothed
    in soft cocoons or spider webs.
    You move across the floor
    like a dragonfly,
    your gaze is as intense
    as the blazing patterns
    on a butterfly's wings.
    Your kindness is as constant
    as the work of worker ants.
    My love for you is like
    abee's love for nectar.





    Submitted on 2004-02-18 23:15:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmmm... love all the insect parallels. I wonder, though... It carries a sense of foreboding... as if autumn is nearing it's close, and winter's chill is felt on the wind. Nicely done. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      are you looking forward to spring coming?
    that is what you seem'd to convey my way, with your poem. Yet, still looking at those clouds coming. I don't know, just my thoughts
    | Posted on 2004-03-01 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
      your writes are well submittd in places that I need a soothing after reading all of the other ones... I am glad to come across your writes, as they are as much needed as a double shot when babysitting.... and this one shall leave me relaxed as well... another nice one
    | Posted on 2004-02-19 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]


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