Description: silly little poem that came to my head one night after a night with friends at a pub.... damn alcohol :)
Moral Crusaders -------------------------------------------
Motionless
Steady and lifeless
These moral crusaders happen to be near
The woodlands over the estuary
Are filled with nocturnal protectors
Shed light onto the treetops
To eliminate their powerful force
Perceptive soldiers
Tripping their way across the land
Deceived by the truth
Trusting in you in this time of impurity
Moral crusaders rise to the occasion
Oh they will get you tho. You shouldn't mock them. Such impudence will surely result in...morality. Right. Well I found it funny, if not a little bit hard to understand. shard
I like this piece, surprised it came to you while intoxicated...lol. It says a lot, yet I still can't pinpoint (for myself) the exact moral lesson of it, but its coming. I like the vividry of this piece, how the pictures light up, yet they are only figurative, very cool. I don't think that it quite makes it too my favorite list, but close. My only suggestion is that you clean up the typos just so they won't distract from the piece, its not too big of deal, but still...good write.
Submission Name: Moral Crusaders
