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    dots Submission Name: Memories Of A Namedots
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    Author: GhiHaD
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 46/64/24
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMemories Of A Namedots
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    Echoes of a forgotten memory
    Linger playfully in my mind
    Resolving conflict eternally
    This state of life is left behind

    Fountains spilling youth
    In dreams we take for granted
    Childhood is no longer in grasp
    Life is downward slanted

    Slowly but surely
    We will be forever gone
    In time our names are buried
    Revived within a song

    While most passers are forgotten
    Some names still do remain
    To think that you are worthy
    Is to trluy be insane




    Submitted on 2004-08-16 20:24:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked the idea of names revived in songs... but then i think a name can be remembered without a person being remembered and a person can be remembered without a name... but yeah... i think if you think you are gonna be remembered and yet havent done anything with your life THATS insanity...
    | Posted on 2004-08-30 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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