I like this a lot. It flows easily and provides a lot of insight into the ongoing search for 'self'... My fav part is: "I canít take this anymore Too much for me to accept My mindís already confused And my heartís in deep torment". Good work!
O good rhyming scheme ! "On vast horizons and majestic sunsets Yet I canít find me" Some days back I heard someone say that if you truly 'find' your ownself you would beat gravity, and you would find everything that is hidden from eyes. I really like this peice !
I really liked this one as well. Its a good poem overall but I wish it could be a little more descriptive. The flow itself was outstanding as I followed it perfectly. It was great and your pic is great, I really like it.