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voodoo


Author: love gone wrong
ASL Info:    27/m/colorado
Elite Ratio:    2.14 - 337 /381 /42
Words: 17
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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voodoo



It's been too long,
since love gone wrong,
felt so right
spirited light
thanks to you
voodoo




Submitted on 2004-02-19 17:37:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This kind of reminds me of that old Ween song "Voodoo Lady." It seems a bit sing-songy, but I suppose that I'm occasionally guilty of that too.
| Posted on 2004-02-20 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  Oooh. What controversy you've caused with this one! Of course i love it, but i admit i AM a little biased for obvious reasons.
| Posted on 2004-02-19 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]
  Short but conveys a lot - I din't understand the last line at first but I gather something from the comments! I really liked this one.
| Posted on 2004-02-19 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
  stinksofshoutboxwolfandslyfoxstinksofshoutbox......
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| Posted on 2004-02-19 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]


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