voodoo

Author: love gone wrong ASL Info:    27/m/colorado Elite Ratio:    2.14 - 337 /381 /42 Words: 17

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voodoo

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It's been too long, since love gone wrong, felt so right spirited light thanks to you voodoo

Submitted on 2004-02-19 17:37:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This kind of reminds me of that old Ween song "Voodoo Lady." It seems a bit sing-songy, but I suppose that I'm occasionally guilty of that too.

| Posted on 2004-02-20 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]

Oooh. What controversy you've caused with this one! Of course i love it, but i admit i AM a little biased for obvious reasons.

| Posted on 2004-02-19 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]

Short but conveys a lot - I din't understand the last line at first but I gather something from the comments! I really liked this one.

| Posted on 2004-02-19 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]

stinksofshoutboxwolfandslyfoxstinksofshoutbox...... www.on1eday.co.uk

| Posted on 2004-02-19 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]

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