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back to reality

Author: Day DreaMeR
ASL Info:    19/F/somewhere
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well school starts this wednesday and im sitting here thinking about how school is gonna be this year but im probably going back to the same old same old...and this is another one of my random poems so its not meant to be good... well....good bye summer...

back to reality

meaning the end of summer,
back to books and mean teachers,
to the people who are annoying,
and the ones who think they are great,
but back to seeing my friends,
also passing notes to them during class (hehe),
back to learning things our teachers try to drill in our heads,
but we forget whatever it is the next day,
and to taking test that i never do well on,
back to the days when i spend most of my time doing homwork,
and having my brain explode!!!

Submitted on 2004-08-22 16:55:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I remember those days. Ihated it but loved seeing my friends.
Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2007-11-25 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

This is a good write that comments on the life of a student

Its true

When I was in school my God how I hated it I was your typical c- student who just did what it took to pass
Im telling you the truth when i say now how I wish I payed better attention

Thanks for your recent comments

The reason I dont put my poetry in classes is that I would like to hopefully open up a few new eyes to the Beauty that God has given us that normally wouldnt think of checking it out

Take Care

| Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  hmm. well iam on spring break so school starts on monday. it counts! i liked this. school bores my soul as well. more negative points about school then positive. lovely. brought back bad memories and good.

| Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by poeticblindness | [ Reply to This ]
  haha I liked this. Gosh what is it? 2 or 3 more weeks? not even i dont even wanna think about it haha. I think this poem was a creative and cute way of looking at school.

back to learning things our teachers try to drill in our heads,
but we forget whatever it is the next day,
and to taking test that i never do well on,

aint that the truth haha. teachers spend so much time explaining things, its through one ear and out the other haha. i think u should maybe break it up into stanzas, it will make it more powerful. maybe adding some more lines will complete it... but u did a very good job expressing a thought and ur point came across. i like the fact that u added the passing notes with friends, it really says that school sucks but at least u can have fun with it sometimes. well done
| Posted on 2004-08-22 00:00:00 | by Ang | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this one, too. I can't believe school is already starting, this summer went by way too fast.

The only thing I would change is the line:
"and to taking test that i never do well on".
Maybe it should be 'taking tests' or 'taking the test'...
| Posted on 2004-08-22 00:00:00 | by Candibat | [ Reply to This ] have to go to you clearly got your point across how summer is ending and school starts ...yep thats how anyone in school thinks, i like the part about the teachers...hehe...this actually isnt a bad poem...just because its so honest and im pretty sure anyone going to school can relate...enjoyed it miss bren...smiles ange
| Posted on 2004-08-23 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]

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