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i was born unto this....
world
but I reside in my creation
created for me by me
where the id
my true self
rides on wings
of dreams
to his destination
where no fork roads exist
and no plot twist
just thickens
and thins
upon command
a universe revolves
within a grain of sand
that lies on a beach
next to an ocean
that is my friend
friend of the sea
is the name i bear
I am there
with aeons
I liked this. It really proves that you have a great imagination. I love how you talk about wanting to be self-created... to not have to live within the human boundaries of the world. I thought this was a very original and well-written piece. Keep up the good work!
Submission Name: creation
