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    dots Submission Name: Full Moondots
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    Author: deadpoet
    ASL Info:    18/f/ Miami, Fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 44/66/27
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
    Total Views: 363
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       this is for my friend. tell me what you think


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    dotsFull Moondots
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    Full Bodied and loyal
    She stands over me every night
    I wish I could hold her tight
    Never let her out of my sight,
    But as the dawn comes she fades away.
    "I'm all alone and looks like you're my only friend"
    But as I tell her this her stare is gray, a mutual colour
    Misery tends to be the third wheel in our conversations
    She leads me to hurt inside; She causes me to bleed from the heart
    That was slowly torn apart.
    She's crying and I can see her tears
    They fall in the form of rain
    As they hit the ground,
    The sun comes and she leaves me in the up coming light,
    But her tears don't fade with her.





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