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    dots Submission Name: I Remember Snowdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI Remember Snowdots
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    I remember the snows of my childhood,
    the blue smoking chimneys of the tiny cottages,
    the cystal lake frozen over,
    the skeletal trees glistening with ice,
    the icicles dancing beneath the wire.
    I remember pink cheeks and frozen hands,
    the snowman surrounded by laughing children.
    Now--as the snow hits my face,
    I am again five years old.




    Submitted on 2004-02-20 00:35:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I live in the southern US. Very rarly do I ever see snow. I don't remember snow when I was little, but to read that is to feel like I do. The imagry really works, and the emotion while limited is just as much as a five year old would know. It seems to convey very simple purity. Nice style. :D
    | Posted on 2004-07-13 00:00:00 | by Printer Shock | [ Reply to This ]
      Isn't wonderful, the first real snowfall... Standing in it, tongue out, trying to catch snowflakes. What a wonderful image. Beautiful. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-22 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice once again Cuds... I like your way with words, short, to the point, packing a powerful message... keep em coming
    | Posted on 2004-02-20 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
      Good write dumplin, always enjoyable to read. You always do a fine job of evoking an emotion in a subtle way.
    | Posted on 2004-02-20 00:00:00 | by DevilDinosaur | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your images. they always paint a picture in front of my eyes. I'm glad you stay with your short poems. although the longer one was good, too.
    | Posted on 2004-02-20 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]


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