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    dots Submission Name: the uninvited guestdots
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    Author: ariadne
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 99/85/26
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       you cant stop the inevitable, no matter how much you ignore it.


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    dotsthe uninvited guestdots
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    The party is full blast
    The uninvited guest
    Walks strangely through the door
    Causes much unrest

    The royal event still
    Continues through the night
    Quiet and waiting he
    Sees no happy sight

    Three days this carries on
    Vows never to conclude
    The beautiful and rich
    Swear death, they can elude

    He creeps among their joy
    They’re low for being top
    He take all they have while
    All at once their hearts stop




    Submitted on 2004-08-24 18:48:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a very good piece, different type of writing. Even thought it was good, the rythm was pretty off and made it shakey to read. Keep working on it all!
    | Posted on 2004-08-24 00:00:00 | by MyHeart2Yours | [ Reply to This ]


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