Description: This descrives the feelings I have towards my little brother and how with my father not always there I'm not always sure who i should be to him!
Who to be? -------------------------------------------
Like every living soul
There’s two sides to see
A brother or a father
Which figure’s right to be?
There to guide the path
Where no light is shone
Priorities sometimes mean
The other side is gone
Should duties be forgotten?
So what’s done is done
The boy will find his own way
The boy is not your son
These thoughts tear the mind
You know not who you are
This war will bear the wounds
And consequence the scar
This battle has no winner
Just follow what’s inside
Face this uphill struggle
It leave’s a downhill ride
That tells a sad and wonderful story at the same time. It's hard to imagine all of that happening. I hope that some of that didn't happen and your brother and father are close. Great poem.
awww... thats so sad! im sure that you are a great big brother. my dad is never around either so i can kinda feel ya on that one. it seems you love your brother very much. i admire you. keep writing you good-really
Sounds good, however I'd like to hear it outloud...sometimes the rhyme feels forced...but that could be how I hear it...not how it's intended.
The boy is not your son...I wonder if the boy has a father. And if he's your brother, do you have a father? This is a good thing for me to wonder...makes things interesting. Good...real delemma I hear in the voice of your poem. Thanks for your words.
Submission Name: Who to be?
