Science of Attraction by dado

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Submission Name: Science of Attraction dots

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Author:	dado
ASL Info:	22/m/uk
Elite Ratio:	2.83 - 25/29/9
Words:	77

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	221
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	535

Description:
Just trying out a new style, similar to my "Expected Return" piece, please read my works and see how this compares!

Thanks

Science of Attraction dots

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A reconstruction of our love
A paint of coat, some extra glue
Just reinforce the bonds
What holds us close together now
Cannot last long

Gravity pulls two masses close
On the moon or two north poles
Repellants fill the air
Faith and truth hook themselves
Providing new bonds

Heavy cavalry appears behind
A ray of light, a second chance
Find a passage through
A single soldier lights the spark
Passion is the flame

Submitted on 2004-08-26 06:10:12 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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defanetly intresting, good writing but the content was kinda wierd, i haven't read a poem like this in a long time. i did like how each stanza is a little bit diferrent if describtion but still the same in content.

milo stills
| Posted on 2004-09-15 00:00:00 | by milo stills | [ Reply to This ]

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