Description: This is about another of my boyfriend's nieces, Taylor. She's Paige's fraternal twin (the subject of Like and Angel in an Old Bible). They are polar opposites in personality but equally sweet and lovely.
You're the bashful one
With the low-key charm and sweetness
Of vanilla
In a chocolate world
Sneaking in smiles
When you think no one is looking
Blushing when you realize someone is
But the most graceful beauty
Sings in lieu of shouting
awwww... she sounds completely adorable! vanilla in a chocolate world is such a GORGEOUS image! and the last line is beautiful! she really does sound like a wee cutie!
that's sweet. Someone's Epiphany is right the vanilla image is gorgeous. I found the pic I told you about again. go to: www.deviantart.com/deviation/9784959/ it fits to your poems. a very well done piece. how many nieces does Paul have??
sweet. i love the last line, "the most graceful beauty/Sings in lieu of shouting." ain't it the truth? I also like "vanilla/In a chocolate world." this is really a beautiful image of this sweet little girl. oh, and i LOVE that cat you're sitting with up there! i've seen it before, and i just wanna rub her belly (not yours! well,.. lol!). great poem and great pic!
very nice poem. Children are such inspirational subjects to write about.
i really like the image of graceful beaty singing in lieu of shouting. that reminds me of a great movie (i can't remmeber the name) where this young woman was so shy and never talked, but boy could she ever sing!
Is tailor pointy like a Hershey's Hug? Just kidding. What can I say? Cute kid. You know theres an advantage to being Bashful. People are led to believe you are modest, when you can get away without being that way.
Submission Name: Bashful
