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    dots Submission Name: I Go Alonedots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    51/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1035/1330/360
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 304
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    Description:
       An issue of faith. Christianity is no cake-walk.


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    dotsI Go Alonedots
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    I am not now what I shall be
    as I was once, in ages past.
    As fire consumes first twig, then tree,
    the winds of change keep fanning me;
    in ashes I am me at last.

    The future holds the grand design
    though I know not my Maker's plan;
    as I am called to cross each line,
    the choice to follow clearly mine,
    I shall obey as best I can.

    All you see here is not my best,
    for I must die to all because
    I made a choice to lay to rest
    one lump of flesh shed through each test;
    when all is dead and never was.

    The truth lies not in what I know.
    Truth stands apart all of its own.
    As I am spent so I shall grow
    to follow Christ when He says, "Go!"
    For when He calls, I go alone.


    The Gadfly




    Submitted on 2004-08-27 04:58:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      brilliant... i really feel like i am in the purification process BIG TIME right now... like the heat has been turned up and what i really am is being revealed and everything i am not is being burnt up... its a really hardout and quite painful experience but i know that it will all be worth it. i really identified with this write so its kinda hard to be unbiased thanx for letting me read this! gives a lil bit of hope!
    | Posted on 2004-08-27 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      There, see? You did it again. Wow! This was great, everything, the rhyme, the meter, the layout, the message, the grammar, etc. is all just right. So, no criticism from me, just a contented smile and another favourite from the master's friend.
    | Posted on 2004-08-29 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]


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