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    dots Submission Name: Friendsdots
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    Author: drkpoet
    ASL Info:    21/m/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 442/527/94
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 418
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 797



    Description:
       Nothing more, nothing less, writing to get it off my chest.


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    dotsFriendsdots
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    A valley deep within
    The heart of stone.
    Finding just one
    Friendship filled with strength.

    Pictures of this friendship
    Hangs deep into your mind.
    Finding just one
    Makes it harder and harder.

    But with each try,
    Your body gets tired.
    Searching takes
    Elements from within your soul.

    Your soul
    Getting lighter,
    The times getting longer,
    A friend from long ago.

    Why did you waste your time looking?
    For there he was,
    Right there.
    Waiting for you to notice.

    But now that your body’s weaker,
    He’ll stand by your side.
    Even though
    His picture you past, a million times.

    DrkPoet




    Submitted on 2004-02-21 10:14:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like your poem...each and every word, oh...but the title...You know...could be something else. You Think? Maybe then I would vote. Your poem is well worth a vote.
    Just a thought or an opinion of my own. Let me know....
    | Posted on 2004-02-21 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice write drk, I get a definite spiritual message here , the references to the soul, and the passing of his picture a million times.(BTW that's passed not past) Either way , mortal friend or divine, it is a good write. Silver
    | Posted on 2004-02-21 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]



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