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    dots Submission Name: deceptiondots
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    Author: besodemuerte
    ASL Info:    31/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    5.83 - 242/253/27
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 2343
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    Bytes: 717



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    dotsdeceptiondots
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    Although your deception wears thin on me
    I'll allow your mask to be worn today.
    because you've lied and bound my soul
    my heart will ache eternal loss on closed display.
    adopted securities stretch my spine to the sky
    so i can see blue instead of your phony display of affection.
    I've relaxed now that my life is worth more than slavery
    and I've censored myself to your infection
    that spread inside me like some euphoric disease.
    you leave me no choice but to expose your charade.
    to slowly tear down these lies that you've made.
    now i peel back your skin to see your heart...
    ...organic casing, plastic parts.




    Submitted on 2004-08-28 17:43:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      pretty good. ireally like the whole wearing a mask thing because most people do. i mean in there homes they act nothing like they do outside. but thats socioty for you. any ways, i really liked this piece
    | Posted on 2005-01-02 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like it! you used some really cool words in it! it's a big change compared to your other poem, your angst poems are better than your love poems. great job <33
    | Posted on 2005-01-06 00:00:00 | by Lemmy | [ Reply to This ]
      Another peek into a heart. but by you and what a ucky picture. Is there hope for a transplant or maybr 'open heart surgery??
    HAhaa! Well this was a very good write, you can be proud. It was nice to read a rather light hearted approach to being thrown awayby a former lover. Thanks again!
    | Posted on 2004-10-25 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      well, allow me to be the first to comment...I LOVED IT! Not that much a fan of love tho, but i loved this one.

    now i peel back your skin to see your heart...
    ...organic casing, plastic parts.

    Really liked that part. And you display pic...I LOVE INVADER ZIM!

    Oh, and welcome to the site. Allow me to introduce myself, I am Dark...

    ->Dark
    | Posted on 2004-08-28 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]


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