so many verses filled with contradictions.. or from general view of things such as butterflies etc..
of course they are not what they seem
hrm.. im wondering if this about distorted reality..
the poem is very withdrawn.. (introverted) i guess this is written on alot.. especially by modern day "poets".. (i consider you to be a Real writter not a "poet") that is besides the point.. i just think that using a perspective.. maybe one of innocence.. i am not sure.. maybe childhood could be ignorance in this? and ignorance as ... vanity?
im not sure.. but i do get the general feeling of the poem..
like i said.. w/e you are writting about in this.. it is vague but oh so distinct..
Very deep and meaningful. I picked this to read only because it had the least comments, and I can't figure out why, I consider it very good, in a dark way talking about giving in to the pressures of society as one HAS to grow up. The only crit I could find was the last verse, to me it's out of character for the rest of the piece, but the whole thing is still excellent. Great job, Be Happy Graeme