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    dots Submission Name: Insomniadots
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    Author: nnehriya
    ASL Info:    22/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 62/33/14
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 595
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    Bytes: 1200



    Description:
       My first poem. Dark and true.


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    dotsInsomniadots
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    When you close your eyes and wallow in nostalgia;
    Compounded love and fear its just a phobia;
    That you wander around searching for the utopia;
    When you are lost in this endless quest for euphoria;

    When try and run away from the abyss of your sorrows;
    You can't get out the way is too narrow;
    Down on your knees you implore for a better tomorrow;
    Just to find out that all hopes are so hollow;

    When you trip and fall while chasing your dreams;
    You call out loud can't help but scream;
    These are the fruits of those deeds committed in prime;
    You weren't the only witness of the nature of your crime;

    And now you begin to pray till eternity;
    But that won't help you are up against your imbibed eccentricity;
    There is no place to hide this is your reality;
    And all left to do is to comprehend your life's insanity;

    This wasn't your destination but you have reached hell;
    Done with the trails will soon be taken to your cell;
    Your sins have outnumbered your alibies;
    So perhaps its time that you open your eyes




    Submitted on 2004-02-22 03:50:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ooh, good ending! It has a good rhyme scheme too, it would make a great song. Pretty interesting concept here.. I like this piece.
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Two Meters Away | [ Reply to This ]
      oh wow. *takes in slowly* the word usage here is awesome. i have a deep love for the english language. and you've used it to a t. i love it. *smattering of applause* i just am sitting here in awe right now.
    | Posted on 2004-10-20 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]



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