Its no good putting music behind lyrics for yourself because usually the piece was written for a completely different stlye. I guess you've grasped the rock aspect of things will all the alrights and come ons, but that's not a bad point in this case. I think it would make a great song personally as mine are all too complicated and I can't put music to them, whereas something like this could be worked on very easily. (Something to consider.)
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