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    dots Submission Name: Unresolved Disputesdots
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    Author: Delirium
    ASL Info:    19/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 128/177/43
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 249
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 641



    Description:
       I wrote this after yet another fight with my mother. I just wanted to post it, so I know it needs some work. Tell me what you think.


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    dotsUnresolved Disputesdots
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    I say what I mean
    And I mean what I say,
    But you don’t listen
    Or try to comprehend.

    I can’t argue with you anymore,
    It hurts too much.
    You can’t see,
    How you are out of touch.

    We both come out hurt
    With scars we don't show,
    Each of us wanting to make up,
    But neither able to forgive.

    How hard it is to say,
    I am sorry.
    Obviously a lot,
    Because we can't muster those three words.

    I scream, I yell
    I bang my fists
    And I secretly wish
    We'd stop fighting like this.




    Submitted on 2004-08-30 20:58:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice write... the teen angst and the drama that goes with it... i fought with my parents all the time. about my writing, about my addictions, about school and other [censored]... life goes on and we forgive and forget... keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2004-08-30 00:00:00 | by GhiHaD | [ Reply to This ]
      i think theres a span in life when we are meant to fight with our olds... like its all we seem capable of doing even though it really sucks while we do it it just seems to happen... its so hard to bite your tongue and move on but im not thinking it will last forever... you just gotta try not to get too vicious while you are still arguing... anyways...good write... hope stuff gets resolved for you soemtime soon
    | Posted on 2004-08-30 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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