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    dots Submission Name: Reading Youdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsReading Youdots
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    I want to read your body
    like the pages of a book
    leisurely worshiping every inch
    like I read the words
    of a cherished volume.





    Submitted on 2004-08-31 12:32:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very nice. I love to read. A book is something to cherish. For me, this so utterly conveys what it means to cherish another.
    | Posted on 2004-08-31 00:00:00 | by jdinning67 | [ Reply to This ]
      This reminds me of your piece That Book, I believe it was called, my first favorite. I really enjoyed this. Great job, I'm a big fan of reading your writing.
    -blt
    | Posted on 2004-08-31 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh to be a book on your shelf just waiting to be read by you, ahh anticipation, very nice expression and thought provoking, just be gentle with the pages, lol...Have a great day...Bob:)
    | Posted on 2004-08-31 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]
      Amy,
    I'm glad I caught this one... I must say that when i read this< I just had to smile :) I enjoy the clean simplistic verse.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-08-31 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      i have to say that i enjoyed this piece of yours. i enjoyed its simplicity. and that it flowed really well. good work and keep them comeing lia
    | Posted on 2004-08-31 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      all i can think is french! french! and french, oh la la *winks* such passion is always simplified with simple words thus giving suave demour~

    ~mawwy~
    | Posted on 2004-08-31 00:00:00 | by mawwy | [ Reply to This ]


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