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    dots Submission Name: Lava lampdots
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    Author: Kueen_Emerald
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 130/160/57
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 462
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 854



    Description:
       Kinda feelin werid about my self..


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    dotsLava lampdots
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    Sometimes i feel like a lava lamp sticker... Do not touch stucker Plasterd over my forehead...
    I think im the one who stuck thst sticker on me.
    Im a tease and a Super Flirt. I lead guys into my life but never keep them inside of it cuase i eirther kick them out or rufuse their entance.
    I feel now bad for em. But the thing is I useally don't see what they see.. I mean ive realized it. I see myself four years ago. As basically a ugly duckling but ppl see me as a swan but i can't relate. When i even look int he mirror i see that 10 year girl buck teeth and over wieght. no confindence was in me then.. Im sick of it.. That means Im if i see my self that way but then that means I don't have sonfindence now. Im a going to try to really get out of this shell of trying to protect my self from somethin i can't




    Submitted on 2004-08-31 17:04:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well alot of spelling errors and run on sentences...and a diffrent format could do this write some good...some sentences in here really arent needed ...sit down with this and go over it sentence by sentence and sort out your thoughts then then throw some spices in their...pop on a pretty bow then see what you've come up with...the idea has potential...but it lacks effort...smiles ange
    | Posted on 2004-08-31 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]



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