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    dots Submission Name: Open you're eyesdots
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    Author: OrenroccA
    ASL Info:    17/M/Virgina
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 29/38/18
    Words: 299
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 396
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1722



    Description:
       This was a time where my sister was thinking of suicide!!


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    dotsOpen you're eyesdots
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    She woke up again today
    But with the intentions to end it all
    "My life is going no where but down"
    "I don't have a pourpose in this crazy world"

    To take her mind off all this pain
    She heads into town
    "What am I doing here ?"
    " I feel like i'm running but going nowhwere"

    But a man overheard
    And said these simple words


    "The sun is shining so open up your eyes
    And you will find your place in life,
    And nothing will get in your way, execpt for yourself"

    Her face lit up with joy
    And a simle crept through the pain
    But a little while later
    She found herself lost again

    But she remembered those simple words


    "The sun is shining so open up your eyes
    And you will find your place in life,
    And nothing will get in your way, execpt for yourself"

    So the surch is on for this man
    The man of such simple wisdom
    But he's nowhere to be found

    Then she spots the man and says
    "I have more words"

    "The sun was shining so i opened up my eyes
    And I found my place in life,
    And nothing got in my way, execpt for myself"

    His face lit up with joy
    And an even bigger smile
    And he sang....

    "The sun is shining so open up your eyes
    And you will find your place in life,
    And nothing will get in your way, execpt for yourself"








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