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    dots Submission Name: Dream Languagedots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDream Languagedots

    There's a poem on every blank page
    another between the words of others.
    They're hidden in the soil
    in the mind,
    in the eyes of children.
    You only have to decode the dream language
    that's foreign to everyone.

    Submitted on 2004-09-01 14:25:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i agree. there are poems everywhere. i like that you compare it to a dream language when you find the poem. something unique in a "language" that no one else will speak. we can all look at a red rose, and when we write a poem about it, each one'll be different. but there is a universal language, too, i think, inside the collective unconscious (if you know anything about Carl Jung). nice poem! makes me want to go find some poems to "dream out" of where they are!
    | Posted on 2004-09-05 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm sorry, it's probably rude to comment with a poem...

    Poems are in poems
    They waft in the air
    And pour from a bottle
    Or play like children
    Holders of dreams
    Reciprocated so
    | Posted on 2004-09-01 00:00:00 | by jdinning67 | [ Reply to This ]
      everything can inspire us - we just have to look around and search deep within ourselves. nice positive message. I think I need to do that more often. I barely write poems lately. but anyway this is a really good poem.
    | Posted on 2004-09-01 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this, but something makes me uncomfortable with the last line. Can't put my finger right on the why, but I like the sound of this better:
    words that are foreign to everyone.
    Maybe it's just the repeated w sounds in words and one.
    Very inspirational.
    | Posted on 2004-09-01 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      "Decode the dream language"...I think of unlocking the creativity within...finding of a vehicle to allow the creativity to express itself.

    I read it as if the mind is a modifier of the soil...draws up a picture of a head full of fertile growing material...ready for a great idea to take seed.
    Thanks so much for writing today.
    | Posted on 2004-09-01 00:00:00 | by marysunshine | [ Reply to This ]
      I could probably prove and say on several things but i think there is no need. Dream Language...perhaps in my mind is a language known to all without being spoken. Some might not understand but this language is known as silence. silence in general terms and is used everyday, through happiness and pain. Foreign to many for they cannot read the minds of others*smiles*.
    Expression of poetic terms of this Dream Language you speak of...it is the artistic mind and charisma of a poet that speaks to us all.

    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by mawwy | [ Reply to This ]

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