Description: me and a close friend wrote this last year. when i first started feeling open about my poems. MY friend was in a bad realtionship and she got abused so we wrote this.... i know theres mistakes but meh i dont care... hope u like it
a broken heart a broken bone -------------------------------------------
Takeing authority on someone elses fear.
Causes pain and suffering for thoses who are dear.
The bruseis you can see are told to be a lie.
It leads the person down and makes them start to cry.
They try so hard to fight it.
But cant seem to achevie.
They live with it forever and regret there missery.
I like it. It sends a deep message to the reader. There are a few spelling mistakes, but overall, it's a good write. You say you and your friend wrote this together? I've never tried writing a poem with a friend before. Maybe I should. Anyways, good job.
Submission Name: a broken heart a broken bone
