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    Author: natasha
    ASL Info:    15/f/brampton
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 113/159/52
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 728
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    Bytes: 111



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       i just made it up.. its short but meh


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    tears run down her face... when everything changes and shes leftedwith nothing, another sad night at home alone




    Submitted on 2004-09-01 21:14:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      tears run down her face
    she wishes they would not flow
    when everything changes
    there is no where she can go
    shes left with nothing
    except her lonely home
    she wishes to have someone
    but its another sad night... she is left all alone


    please name it!
    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by ibelikeso | [ Reply to This ]
      It seems more like a good line that should either be the beginning, the middle, or the end of a good poem, story, book.. song.. anything. Add more to it. It's definitely got potential..
    | Posted on 2004-09-01 00:00:00 | by slickviper097 | [ Reply to This ]
       is this what your currently going through?
    this looks more like a line from a book to be honest?
    but meh, it made me think so i like it, most others dont do that for me, lol kudo's for you
    | Posted on 2004-09-01 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]


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