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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    She's so pretty.
    She never thinks.
    She's like a talking doll
    never designed to say no.




    Submitted on 2004-09-02 16:02:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      *laughs* ludacris is all that i can say with a touch of sarcasm in this piece. short-tempered as well.

    I enjoyed this

    ~mawwy~
    | Posted on 2004-09-04 00:00:00 | by mawwy | [ Reply to This ]
      Bitter. that's the tone I get out of this. It's sad how women just do whatever they're told and don't think twice that it's only because of their gender.

    I think the worst would have to be, when a man expects all women to do that. And Alan, I'm sorry, I'm not blond, but some of the strongest, most intelligent women I know are blonde.

    -emo.
    | Posted on 2004-09-03 00:00:00 | by emo-tastic | [ Reply to This ]
      you said all that needed to be said here. a great statement. powerful in its simplicity. it's sad that there are a lot of girls/women which are like that.
    | Posted on 2004-09-03 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and sweet but with enough meaning behind the words to actually mean something. Good job... and yeah... most people are superficial... we might as well all be Barbie dolls sometimes ^.^
    -Alli
    | Posted on 2004-09-02 00:00:00 | by Childoutspoken | [ Reply to This ]
      i think everyone is like this a bit. superficial. even me. nice little bit. i like how you make a big statement in a few words. i guess thats the definition of a good poet. nice work.
    | Posted on 2004-09-02 00:00:00 | by nameless_nobody | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay This makes me want to just scream in her face to get a clue and take action. This is so not me, but I know people like this and even have a friend like this... Nice to see ya again.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-09-02 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      Very interesting! Belive me I know some people like that always trying to be perfect and wanting to please. just never become one of them be happy to be yourself.
    | Posted on 2004-09-02 00:00:00 | by Spankey | [ Reply to This ]


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