your touch,
ur kiss,
ur lips i cant resist.
your smile ,
your eyes.
always looking in mine.
im falling for you and i cant resist.
loveing you is all i know how to do.
the letters,
the calls.
walks down the halls.
me in your arms..
what a life.
the fights
the crys
the tears,
there mine.
you pull me close
and wont let go.
you love me.
and i love you.
nothing more we can do.
its unristable.
Whoa, you pretty much touched on the feelings of a million other people in love. Or maybe just me, eh. Every stanza had a continious pace and the last lines ended them well. I did notice that the first stanza was longer than the rest, but you shouldn't worry about that, everything works were it's at. Nice write
Submission Name: unristable
